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My favourite film
The film is Rorber Wall-E.It was made by Disney.There's no actor because it is a cartoon show.
The sotry tells baout the future of Earth. There's noly a robert called Wall-E.Humans have moved to other planets because the enviroment on Earth is bad. Wall-E is lonely,altough he is a robert, he loves his "life".One day ,he meets a robert from other planet named Eva. She is a beautifulgirl is Wall-E 's eyes. Later,he falls in love with Eva and they save the enviroment on Earth together.
Humans go vack and live happily.It's a romantic and tought-provoking film.
有一些拼写错误属于打字失误、只找语法错误！
The film is Rorber Wall-E.It was made by Disney.There's no actor because it is a cartoon show.
The sotry tells baout the future of Earth. There's noly a robert called Wall-E.Humans have moved to other planets because the enviroment on Earth is bad. Wall-E is lonely,altough he is a robert, he loves his "life".One day ,he meets a robert from other planet named Eva. She is a beautifulgirl is Wall-E 's eyes. Later,he falls in love with Eva and they save the enviroment on Earth together.
Humans go vack and live happily.It's a romantic and tought-provoking film.
有一些拼写错误属于打字失误、只找语法错误！
EARTH要有定冠词
The film is Rorber Wall-E.It was made by Disney.
is应该去掉 is、was 重复了
have moved前是单数，应用has moved
She is a beautifulgirl is Wall-E 's eyes.是病句吧？