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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/30 21:54:44
Now many people hunt for fun. And many peole like fed animal, people think themselves have mercy and love animal. So they make the animals in very small cages in home and give them inedible food. When they feel not good they will tortrue them; when they happy they will abuse them. They just regard animal as toys.
Humanity should think if one day we were be animal as animals, how a bout our life.

...people think they have mercy and love animals...
或者
...people think themselves as ones who have mercy and love animals

...So they put the animals in very small cages in homes...
或者
...So they keep the animals in very small cages in homes...

...When they don't feel good...

...when they are happy...
或者
...when they are feeling happy...

我觉得“They just regard animal as toys.
”这句话这样说更好:They regard animals as nothing but toys.

最后一句
Human kind should think about what if one day we become animals, what will happen then?

另外加一句,注意一下复数:animal在这里应该是animals。