UC知道英语高手进来下！！这几句话哪里错了啊？
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1.the relation among people is purer than the relation in real life.(comparisons)
2.The author was completely immersed in the crazy love between Tom and Lily.(passive voice)
3.though not inordinately long is an amalgamation of childhood fantasies(wordiness)
(这句话不完全）
句子后面的括号是WORD给的提示，由于英语太差，不会改，请高手们帮个忙啊！！
2.The author was completely immersed in the crazy love between Tom and Lily.(passive voice)
3.though not inordinately long is an amalgamation of childhood fantasies(wordiness)
(这句话不完全）
句子后面的括号是WORD给的提示，由于英语太差，不会改，请高手们帮个忙啊！！
1.the relation among people is purer than that in real life.(comparisons)
2.The author was completely immersed in the crazy love between Tom and Lily.(passive voice).
3.though not inordinately long is an amalgamation of childhood fantasies (wordiness)
though the talk is not inordinately long it is an amalgamation of childhood fantasies.