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Maria loved to look at the star.And when the night was clearly,she would do that.Maria's father wasn't pleased with her interest.He even gives her a telescope so that she could see the stars better.Maria interest in the stars grew.She watched the stars more or more.She spent many time looking at the sky.At half past ten in the night of October 1,1847,she found a new comet.Soon she was asking to wrote books about stars.She was ecen asked to teach about them.

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Maria (loves) to look at the star.And when the night was (clear),she would do that.Maria's father wasn't (mind) with her interest.He even (gave) her a telescope so that she could see the stars better.(Maria's) interest (to) the stars (was growing).She watched the stars more (and) more.She spent many time looking at the sky.At half past ten in the night of October (1st),1847,she found a new comet.Soon she was (asked) to (write) books about stars.She was ecen asked to teach about them.

Maria loved to look at the (stars).And when the night was (clear),she would do that.Maria's father (was) pleased with her interest.He even (gave) her a telescope so that she could see the stars better.Maria (was interested) in the stars grew.She watched the stars more (and) more.She spent (much) time looking at the sky.At half past ten in the night of October (1st),1847,she found a new comet.Soon she (was asked) to (write) books about stars.She was even asked to teach about them.