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——How to Study English
As an international language, the significance of English is emphasized everyday at school. As a sophomore, although I have studied English for over 10 years, yet I’ve not finished English curriculum. But now, I will introduce my may to learning English.
To Chinese students, the worst difficulty of English is writing. So I write the composition as a practice. Writing is the most important skill, except speaking. If you want to enter into some great joint-venture or overseas-funded enterprises, you must write the resume totally in English. Pay attention on the writing, because it indicates your real English level. Second, listen the English includes songs, TVs and movies at least 20 minutes everyday, otherwise you may forget it. After you are accustomed to listening English, you will comprehend the meaning unconsciously. Last but not least, when you are reading some English, please sit at the corner or where there is nobody and

How to Study English
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