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Dear Harry,
How are you ? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have been offered a scholarship at a university in Australian for my further education.One hundred and twenty students take exams for it. However,my parents are not happy about it.They are strong against my going there.They think it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel alone.They advise me to study in Beijing what is the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.How can I ask them accept the fact I have grown up?
Best wishes
Yours,
Li Mei
Dear Harry,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have been offered a scholarship at a university in Australian for my further education. One hundred and twenty students take exams for it. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there. They think it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel alone. They advise me to study in Beijing what is the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them. How can I ask them accept the fact I have grown up?
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Mei
1. 不能说a news，改成 some wonderful news
2. in Australian (澳大利亚的)改成in Australia (澳大利亚)
3. take exams 改成t ook exams
4. strong against 改成 strongly against
5. too far away 改成 so far away
6. alone 改成 lonely
7-8 They advise me to study in Beijing what is the capital instead. 改成 , Instead, they advise me to study in