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There are many ways to help people to have a healthy lifestyle. First of all, people should have a positive attitude and keep their mind clearly. In people’s life, they have to face to trouble things and challenges. If their spirit are weak, when they get challenges they will be hurt. Lance Armstrong is a good example for people. Lance was diagnosed concern. Even though lance got concern, he back to his bicycle team. Eventually, he is the oldest people to get the won. People who get concern will feel sad and wait for death, but lance has a positive attitude and he still alive. Second, do exercise everyday is necessary for people. Does exercise will make your body strong and good for you defend the sick. Some people focus on swimming and running. Some play basketball or soccer. However, just do sport everyday is good for your body. In attention, the sport plan has to base on you. Because some people follow other person and they don’t know what they
There are many ways to help people to have a healthy lifestyle. First of all, people should have a positive attitude and keep their mind (改成minds) clearly(改成clear). In people’s life(改成lives), they have to face to trouble things(to trouble things删掉或者改成face troublesome things) and challenges. If their spirit(改成spirits) are weak, when they get challenges they will be hurt(改成they will get hurt或者If their spirits are weak, they will be defeated when faced with challenges). Lance Armstrong is a good example for people(删掉for people). Lance was diagnosed concern(改成diagnosed with cancer. Concern是关心的意思. Cancer是癌症). Even though Lance got concern(cancer), he (加went) back to his bicycle team. Eventually, he is (was. 注意时态) the oldest people to get the won (改成to win, 不是to get the won). People who get concern will feel sad and wait for death, but Lance has(改成had) a positive attitude and he (加is) still alive. Second, do exercise (把do删掉. 说exercising everyday) everyday is necessary for people. Does (改成