请帮我把这句话翻译成英文，别拿翻译工具来哄我~

The make-up artist should be profitable.
I believe that most of the girls are fond of it.
However, aren't you insisted on your career of artist?
最后一句比较突兀 因为没有上下文 可能不能很好的表达语气或者意思

化妆这个职业应该很赚钱的
Being a make-up artist should make good money.

我相信大多数女孩子都比较喜欢的~
I believe most of the girls prefer to do that.
(@注： prefer to do = 喜欢；偏爱做~~某事 )

但是你不坚持你的艺术事业了吗？
Aren't you going to stick with your career as an artist?

化妆这个职业应该很赚钱的.，
To be a makeup girl,one is supposed to earn lots of money.
我相信大多数女孩子都比较喜欢的~
And I belive that most girls like this job.
但是你不坚持你的艺术事业了吗？
However,are you giving up your art life?

making up(?) is a good job,
i believe that girls will like it
but don't u keep in ur art?

The job of making up should have a good fortune,
and I believe most girls will like it,
but won't you insist on your art career?

2楼of去掉 prefer也不合意