UC知道帮我改改雅思作文 明天就要考试了 急
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题目 Many governments have spent large sums of money on weapons for the sake of self-defense. Some people think this practice should be stopped. Do you agree?
Nowadays,countries'safety is gradually become an important issue.So many governments have send large sums of money on weapons for the self-defense. Whether this practice should be stopped has become an issue debate.Before presenting my opinion,I would like to probe into both sides of the debates.
Supporters claim that it should not be stopped.First of all,conflict between different countries can not be avoided.The conflict can ba aroused by trade,economic compition,culture and religion.Second,there are still many terrorists in the world,and we can not forcast where and when our countru will be attacted.At the same time,some country is still seeking hegemony, and there are still many destablising factors. so must prepare engouh weapons for our self-protect.As a matter of fact.,every citizens want to live in
Nowadays,countries'safety is gradually become an important issue.So many governments have send large sums of money on weapons for the self-defense. Whether this practice should be stopped has become an issue debate.Before presenting my opinion,I would like to probe into both sides of the debates.
Supporters claim that it should not be stopped.First of all,conflict between different countries can not be avoided.The conflict can ba aroused by trade,economic compition,culture and religion.Second,there are still many terrorists in the world,and we can not forcast where and when our countru will be attacted.At the same time,some country is still seeking hegemony, and there are still many destablising factors. so must prepare engouh weapons for our self-protect.As a matter of fact.,every citizens want to live in
这是最典型的模板啊，最多6分了。
Nowadays，whether……这些词都是模板的痕迹啊。时间来不及了，注意点语法错误吧。写作6分也还说得过去，争取听力阅读考好点，拉拉总分吧。
神经病你怎麽回事啊？