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I am a middle school student who live in an old village in the southwest china. there is something I would like to invite you to learn. the village where I live in is famous for a old temple which was built hundreds of years ago. but over the past few years, many visitors home and abroad have come here for sightseeing. worse more, the temple was heavily destroyed by earthquake and floods, and it was not protected well. so nowadays some people want to break it down and set up a factory. in my opinion, our civilzation is great and the temple needs to be protected well
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I am a middle school student living in an old village where is in the southwest of China. There is something I would like to share with you. The village where I live has a famous temple that was built several hundred years ago. Over the past few years, the temple has attracted many visitors including foreigners for sightseeing. Unfortunately, the temple was heavily destroyed by earthquake and