这句话这样写对吗?请大虾们帮忙看看.谢谢!

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/06 18:49:52
Ben,I am now processing the employment annual audit. Since the work permit of foreigners are required if the company recruits foreigners, may I have your work permit for this annual audit on next week? Thank you.

首句processing 改为dealing with, processing 是名词
Since the work permit of foreigners are required if the company recruits foreigners这句，are改为is,还有公司是确定的吗，如果是才加the,如果不是应用复数形式，
may I have your work permit for this annual audit on next week，这里have最好用borrow，借用的意思，还有去掉on

permit应用名词形式，since一般会跟完成时的句子，表将来时间前应用介词in