急需~~英语作文问题~~谢谢

Dear Anny
I miss you very much，my sweet sister。It has been three months for the last time I see you in the theme park of capital。I remember it is a sunny day and we both with our parents。
You know the summer holiday is coming，so I wish you can come with me to spend a cool holiday。We can swim in the near park。We also can eat ice-cream whenever wewant。Oh，don't forget to take with your lovely dog Honey。
I really hope you can come。
Remember take my wishes to your parents。
Yours Green

Honorific Uncle Wang
I konw you have been abroad for six years。And you will be back in three weeks。I want to know if you can take some foreign books for me。
You know this is the second year I have been learn French and it is a so important year for youngling learners，such as me。If you promise me I hope you can take some chefdoeuvres。One book is enough if you come back with too much luggag