帮我看一下下面这短话的语法错误，谢谢啦！

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The climate changed because of mankind behaves. First of all, the air pollution is most important problem. The air pollution will hurt the atmosphere and earth surface. For example, we burn coal to make the electric in my hometown. Everyone knows that burn coal will make the air pollution, but we have no choice. The coal is the most popular resource in my hometown. The government never tries to find a way to stop using coal because they think that is good for economic. In another hand, people like using it because it is cheap. So the atmosphere which is in my hometown is becoming worse. It will also influence the world in one day. Secondly, in many years ago, people burn the forest to make the farmland that made a lot of CO2. The scientist said that is the worst way to make farmland, but that was happened in the past. The only way we can do is try our best to heal the atmosphere. Thirdly, nowadays people all like driving a car even though they just go to supermarket which is near their

小错误好多,我就简单看了一下.... 还需要努力啊!!

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