能使用分词的地方要尽量避免使用从句吗?

Hmmm, It depends on how complicated the sentence is:

for simple sentence:

1. He is a man who loves to play football.
2. He is a man ,loving to play football.

Both are OK.

But for complicated sentence,it's better to simplify.

1.He is a man who loves to play football,and loves music and sometimes go out for camping.

he's a man loving to play football, loving music and sometimes going out for camping....

这也不是吧，关键是一个句子搞几个从句怪别扭的，连着几个分词也怪别扭的，所以参杂着用咯。。。。
另外弱弱地说一句，用分词错的概率比较大，有些人可能因此认为用分词显得英语牛逼点，我不赞同。不过我不是英语改卷者，你完全可以忽略我。。。

恩对，能使用分词的地方要尽量避免使用从句的

能够简洁地表达自己的意思就好了。