英语造句1

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/03 13:42:07
使用以下单词进行造句,请高手指正句子是否存在错误
operation successful alone exchange inquire
1.The operation had been successful,so he get a new life.由于这次手术成功,他重获了新生命
2.The BeiJing Olympic Game is a successful sport meet. 北京奥运会是一届成功的体育盛会.
3.It is terrible thing to be alone. 孤独是一件可怕的事.
4.Please you telephone the hotel exchange,if you call Mr.Marry. 如果你要找玛丽小姐,请你打电话到酒店的电话交换台.
5.Don’t inquire anyone’s privacy. 不要随便打听别人的隐私.

The operation was successful and he got a new life.(逗号和连词用得不合规矩..另外..逗号后面请空一格)
2.The BeiJing Olympic Games is a successful sports event.(Games..s不能丢啊)
3.It is a terrible thing to be alone.(冠词)
或者..It is terrible to be alone. 更简单..更合习惯...
4.I advise you to hold at least a few foreign exchange before you board plane for a abroad trip...
原句没一点正确的..我的句子用的是"外汇"的意思..如果要保留原意..应该是...
Please call the hotel exchange if you want to talk to Mary.
Mary明显不是一个姓..不能用Miss做称谓...
5.完全正确...

遣词造句中文思维痕迹过浓。我所说的不是“语法”思维!

第一句用had,get不正确,如果没有对时态的特殊要求,不如简单点:For this successful operation, he gets a new life.

第三句thing是多余的

第四局 telephone不是动词,应改为call

1.X get--Got
2.X meet--meeting BeiJing-- Beijing Game--Games
3.X It is a terrible thing to be alone.[贯词不可掉〕
4.X 名词有时可以做动词,telephone用的好,但一般不这样用.我建议你这样写,免得显得头重脚轻.
If you call Marry,you can phone/call the hotel exchange please.
5.X 任何人和别人有区别.我建