UC知道英语作文高手来看下啊、看看这作文能拿几分＼求速度啊。
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/09/25 03:28:13
题目：每个人都有自己最喜欢的礼物，请你根据下列信息及要求，以“My favorite birthday present”为题，写一篇英语短文．
你最喜欢什么的礼物是什么？什么时候。什么人赠送给你？你为什么喜欢它？
要求：词数70个单词左右，句首已经提供。
My favorite biethday present
evetyone has his/her favorite present.My favorite birthday
----------------------------------------------------------
present is a dog.On my tenth birthday, my father sent him to me.When
----------
I saw him,I was very happy.Because this present is very special.The dog is black.He is samll and he has two big ears and two black eyes. He is very beautiful,isn't he? I love him very much.Because I like dogs and he can play with me when I feel bored. He always makes me laugh.When I watch TV on the sofa, he sits down on the floor.I usuaslly sleep with him , too.
He is my good friend.
有划线的是已经提供的部分．
额、 开头哪个单词是everyone
这个是初2的写的.
满粉10
he sits down on the floor 这句后面还有一句:He also watches T
你最喜欢什么的礼物是什么？什么时候。什么人赠送给你？你为什么喜欢它？
要求：词数70个单词左右，句首已经提供。
My favorite biethday present
evetyone has his/her favorite present.My favorite birthday
----------------------------------------------------------
present is a dog.On my tenth birthday, my father sent him to me.When
----------
I saw him,I was very happy.Because this present is very special.The dog is black.He is samll and he has two big ears and two black eyes. He is very beautiful,isn't he? I love him very much.Because I like dogs and he can play with me when I feel bored. He always makes me laugh.When I watch TV on the sofa, he sits down on the floor.I usuaslly sleep with him , too.
He is my good friend.
有划线的是已经提供的部分．
额、 开头哪个单词是everyone
这个是初2的写的.
满粉10
he sits down on the floor 这句后面还有一句:He also watches T
5,给个很谦虚的分数,说实在的,句子还有很大提升空间,还可以润色一下,用词还要斟酌,代词,复句,并列句,注意下
25分可以拿15分，倒装句用得不好。并且没有注意词语连贯性
我给7分 代词用的不对而且行文不是很连贯，但大致意思不错。
^_^
7或8分