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A Gift
Nobody dislikes gifts, especially what they can make us happy.
I have received a nice gift, a scarf. At that time I argued with my mother. We didn't want to talk with each other.But the next day, she gived me a beautiful scarf. She says,"Don't have a cold." I was really excited and I said,"Thank you, mom." She smiled. I think she wasn't mad at me anymore. I know, I got a gift not just, I also received her love. I love her as before.
I usually wear the scarf in winter. I can think of my lovely mother when I see it. I think it's my favorite gift.

Everybody likes gifts, especially which can make them happy.
I have received a nice gift,it is a scarf. At that time I argued with my mother. We didn't want to talk with each other.But the next day, she gived me a beautiful scarf. She says,"Don't catch a cold." I was really excited and I said,"Thank you, mom." She smiled. I think she wouldn't be angry with me anymore. I know, I got a gift as well as her love and I love her as before.
Now I usually wear the scarf in winter. I think it's my favorite gift.

Nobody does not like gifts, especially which can make us happy.
I have received a nice gift, a scarf. At that time I argued with (argue是感觉是对不同意的事情发表观点,这里用my mother and I had some disagreement on something.) my mother. We didn't want to talk with (改成talk to。 Talk with 是谈论某事)each other.But the next day, she gived (改成gave)me a beautiful scarf. She says(改成 said),"Don't have ( 改成 catch 或get)a cold." I was rea