UC知道请帮忙看看以下句子有无语法错误
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1.Living in nursing house,old people feel lonely,helpless and deserted by their children.-->请问需要改成being deserted by their children吗？
2.Studying abroad,some students cannot adapt to the local life,feel very lonely and homesick and even want to commit suicide.-->feel之前需要加连词或者they吗？
2.Studying abroad,some students cannot adapt to the local life,feel very lonely and homesick and even want to commit suicide.-->feel之前需要加连词或者they吗？
1。不一定，也可以把by their children去掉，弱化被动结构的行为感，单纯地用过去分词作表语，表达被动状态。当然如果一定要保留by their children的话就要用being了，因为它实际上表达了一种行为，那么在被动的状况下，改为动名词就要将be改为现在分词了。
2。严格地讲，可以不改。因为作为简单句来看，可视作do,do and do结构，不过比较臃肿，最好选择其中一个做成分词性状语，或者写成students的定语从句
1.需要啊，因为是被动。而且这句话也有点小问题，最好改成：
Living in nursing house,old people who feel lonely and helpless，are deserted by their children
2.需要加一个连词，不过只要把前面的句子改成名词性从句就行了，即改成：
Studying abroad,some students who cannot adapt to the local life,feel very lonely and homesick and even want to commit suicide.