谢谢各位帮我用英语翻译一下了~~~ 谢谢

The outstanding university of your country contains the first-rate teachers and first-class education, which is also my ideal campus to study further. In addition, the language, etiquettes, architecture, custom and entertainment and something else of your culture all attract me intensely, and your country is the place I want to touch and to understand.
But I know the language of your country is nonproficient, so I have planned to learn the language in Korea. And then I will struggle to be fluent in it and to be a part of society as soon as possible. At last, I will continue to study on my professional cources.

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Your university teachers and teaching is the first-class further my study the ideal campus. And your language, etiquette, architecture, clothing, food, entertainment, etc are always attracted to the cultural understanding to contact me.
Because language is not proficient in Korea, I'm going to learn languages, first in the short