UC知道帮我看下英语作文..修改下..
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很重要的哦～
As you know ,beijing held the olympic games in 2008.And China got the most medal.As a Chinese ,i think i should practice more exercise.Playing basketball is my favourte sports.in one hand ,i think that playing basketball can help me have a heathier body .in other hand ,i think i can make more friends by playing basketball.when i play basketball ,i feel full of happiness. after a long time work,i think i should relax myself. and playing basketball is a good way .i love it .
有错就提哦..
As you know ,beijing held the olympic games in 2008.And China got the most medal.As a Chinese ,i think i should practice more exercise.Playing basketball is my favourte sports.in one hand ,i think that playing basketball can help me have a heathier body .in other hand ,i think i can make more friends by playing basketball.when i play basketball ,i feel full of happiness. after a long time work,i think i should relax myself. and playing basketball is a good way .i love it .
有错就提哦..
最好是AS WE KNOW，更有亲切感，然后Olympic Games大写，是专用N，MEDAL加S，多锻炼应是exercise more often 或do more sports．然后下一句改为my favourite active．或 Basketball is...
接着Ifeel all happiness.
Also,after a long time of working,....
另外，可以自己加一些连词在里面，如What's more? However 等．
祝你好运＾