thank you letter 作文

Dear Jack
I'm very glad to get your letter .Thanks for your letter.I think I should tell you about my hobby.
I like collecting stamps.It's interesting.And it's good for me to open my eyes.I have 224 of them .I collect then for two years.I get my first stamp on my twelfth brithday.There is a rabbit on it.At that time ,I was very happy and surprise.
I hope you study hard,and what's your hobby?
yours
Anna

一楼的they are work hard应该是they are working hard

Dear Linda,
Thanks for your letter.let me tell you about myself.There are three people in my family. my father,my mother and i. my father is a teacher.my mother is a woker. they are very hard working. I am a student. I like singing and dancing. My favorite subject in school is English.Because it is interesting.I want to learn English. Can you help me? Write to me soon.