请专家看看有没有语病或错误的地方！！！！！快点

错误挺多的
我就直接把改正后的写下来了

The play might begin in a moment.A writer hurried to the ticketoffice,
but the tickets were sold out. At the moment ,a man hurried to the ticketoffice to return the tickets.The writer bought a ticket for next Wendesday. She was sad.

注意

at the moment是在此时的意思，in a moment是马上的意思
不用混了

时态，介词都有问题。。。。问题大大地

the play may begin in a moment ,the writer hurried to the ticket office
,but the tickets were sold out ,at that moment ,the man hurried to the ticket office and returned the tickets ,the writer bought for next wendnesday's ticket ,she is sad
貌似新概念的吧

问题很多，给你改一下，自己对照哦：
The play is about to begin, the writter goes to the ticket office in a hurry,but the tickets had been sold out, at the same time, a man comes in and refundes the ticket hurriedly,the writer buys the very ticket and it is for next wendesday,she is sad.
时态要统一！

piay - play
may - might
at moent - at the