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Dear Sir or Madam
My name is XXX and student number is XXXX, major is Master of International Finance. My English course will start at 20 August. I already had my PVA and pay my fees lately, but I haven't got my COE.
For the sake of my course will start in 3 weeks, so I am hoping that is there any possible to send my COE as soon as possible. I don’t want to miss this semester.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to your prompt reply.
Your sinncerely,
XXXX
这封信是写给学校,想让他们尽早发coe（缴费收据一类）给我， 所以我想能表达尽量客气一点。
不知道谁能帮我修改一下呢~
谢谢
（开头处有些单调，不想总用is，该如何修改呢，谢谢）
My name is XXX and student number is XXXX, major is Master of International Finance. My English course will start at 20 August. I already had my PVA and pay my fees lately, but I haven't got my COE.
For the sake of my course will start in 3 weeks, so I am hoping that is there any possible to send my COE as soon as possible. I don’t want to miss this semester.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to your prompt reply.
Your sinncerely,
XXXX
这封信是写给学校,想让他们尽早发coe（缴费收据一类）给我， 所以我想能表达尽量客气一点。
不知道谁能帮我修改一下呢~
谢谢
（开头处有些单调，不想总用is，该如何修改呢，谢谢）
已修该，你看合不合适？
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is XXX and my student ID is XXXXX, majored in Master of International Finance. My English course will start on 20th August. I already had my PVA and paid my fees recently, but I haven't got my COE.
I am hoping a replay before my course which starts in 3 weeks, I don't want to miss this semester.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to your reply.
Your Sincerely
XXXX
总觉得还有些问题，让我再给你看看！
请问你信中“major”是指什么意思？
你在查查“sincerely" 的拼写，我觉得我拼的也不对！
对不起，没注意到你不想用“is” 来介绍你的名字，那么下面几个供你选：
1）XXXX is my name
虽然还是用了"is "但没有那么单调了
2）I am XXXXX
这个还行
不过我绝的用"is"或"am"更正式一些，虽然单调了点。
2楼的也对用“recently”比用"lately"好些， 以帮你改成“recently”！
嗯，参考了一下楼下的修改，我有帮你改了改
又回来看了看，楼下的有些改的不太正式
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is XXX and student number is XXXX. I&#