帮忙看一下这段英语是否有语病,有的话帮忙改一下,没的话把意思写出来

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/12 21:32:54
Mr.wang dear:

I am your fan, I like to watch you work. I would like to ask why you do not know Mandarin. I would like to taste the dishes you do. I also want to have your nose knocked askew. I think your sister is equipped with Miriam Yeung.

I am your fan. I like to watch you working. I would like to ask why you do not know Mandarin. I would like to try the dishes you cook. I also want to have your nose askew. I think your sister is equipped as Mariam Yeung.

第一行 watch后面的you改成your