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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/30 09:15:18
Every one year,thousands of people visit the city Venice.It's very beautiful.
There are not any read there, so there are not any cars buses and taxis either.
There are canals only.All of them add to 178and one of them is quite big while rest are small.Peoplemove up and down the canals withboats.Venice is sink now.It was said that in 2040 Venice might be under water.The sea calling Adriatic will cover it.(只允许改10处)
对不起啊,没出完整,不过很满意了

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Every year,thousands of people visit the city Venice.It's very beautiful.
There is no road , so there are no cars, buses and taxis either.
There are canals only.All of them add to 178 and one of them is quite big while the rest are small. People move up and down the canals with boats.Venice is sinking now.It was said that in 2040 Venice might be under the water.The sea called Adriatic will cover it.

开头every one year, 好奇怪...each year就可以了.
the city 可以省略的.
so 前面不用","
read是...什麽?
so there are not any cars, buses, or taxis.

Venice is sinking now. 用ing形式
The sea called Adriatic will cover it. 用被动.

1every year, thousands of people visit the city venice. it's very beautiful. there 2is not any read there, so there are not any cars, buses 3or taxis either. there are canals only. all of them add 4up to 178 and one of them is quite big while 5the rest are small. people move up and down 6in the canals