UC知道急请英文写作高手帮我检查文章语法
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请大家帮我看看下面的段落是否正确表达、意思清楚。请指正，谢谢！
1. Most architects are aware of applying sustainable and ecological technologies in their designs. However, only a few projects can be classified as Positive Development. For instance, few if any, designers’ integrating methods are able to make the building structures work by themselves: most designers still negatively add machines on somewhere of the buildings thus cause environment stress.
2. However, the white central area of the diagram represents the research domain which has been ignored by the design-research community. The unexplored area means the combination design of indoor water system, outdoor water system, the building, and the landscape. In order to do contribution in this research area, the researcher will do a whole water system design for both the vertical farm and the landscape in ANSI project and will analyse the whole design process.
3. However unlike the classic traditional design process as the spiral described, in A
1. Most architects are aware of applying sustainable and ecological technologies in their designs. However, only a few projects can be classified as Positive Development. For instance, few if any, designers’ integrating methods are able to make the building structures work by themselves: most designers still negatively add machines on somewhere of the buildings thus cause environment stress.
2. However, the white central area of the diagram represents the research domain which has been ignored by the design-research community. The unexplored area means the combination design of indoor water system, outdoor water system, the building, and the landscape. In order to do contribution in this research area, the researcher will do a whole water system design for both the vertical farm and the landscape in ANSI project and will analyse the whole design process.
3. However unlike the classic traditional design process as the spiral described, in A
第五段may not 改为does not
第二段
design of the indoor water system
This ignored area is defined as
In order to explore this unkown area,the researcher could do further suvey(contribution):a whole water system design for the vertical farm ，the landscape in ANSI project ,and then analyse the whole design process.
第三段，However, process of design, try to anlayse
in ANSI water design project ,
第四段
The consultants should include structural, mechanical, electrical, and plumbing engineers.
第六段
30% of the expenses
第七段
situated in （不确定）