英语好的进阿!

my heart will never change,and only when it experiences more can i go futher

My heart will never change.

Experiencing the test,I can just go futher.

fellenna - 首席运营官 十二级 ——文学家的翻译

问题补充的这一句完全可以。后句应该是半倒装吧。。。

My heart will remain unchanged forever,
And our love can last long only through ordeals.

My heart will not change,and it can stand test so that it will go further

My heart will not change.Stand the test in order to go further

这句所存在的语法不是很多!`
所以基本上大家都算正确!~

fellenna - 首席运营官 十二级
感觉他的翻译与其他不同，应该不错。