帮忙短文改错,谢谢

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Last Sunday my brother and I went on trip to our uncle’s.We were riding along a hillside then suddenly some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes.We could not move a bit.Fortunately,Isaw some farmers working in the distance.Waving our hand,we cried for help like crazy.On hearing us,they run to us as fast as they could.Thanks for their help,we were sent to a nearby hospital and received medical treatment in time.We all felt very grateful to these farmers for their kindness although we didn’t even about their names.

went on trip ---went on a trip
then--when
were去掉
hand--hands
run --ran
Thanks for --Thanks to
even about --even know about

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Last Sunday my brother and I went on a trip to our uncle’s.
We were riding along a hillside , suddenly some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes.
We could not move a bit.Fortunately,I saw some farmers working in distance.
Waving our hands,we cried for help like crazy.
On hearing us,they ran to us as fast as they could.
Thanks to their help,we were sent to a nearby hospital and received medical treatment in time.
We all felt very grateful to these farmers for their kindness although we didn’t even konw their names.