根据大概意思修改一下语法

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I invite you to our school representatives to our school. Here is our school in recent years:

1: founded in * *, belong to national demonstration in high school.
2: school teacher education department by filipina-american elected. (don't punish children),
3: the school dining room is exclusively on the visual design concept to students.
4: school regularly extracurricular activities (do pictorial, ball games, the knowledge competition, etc.)
5, The school's appearance design is the design of the students.

I have two years in our school graduation, right, it's a little up. The school to me to feel like home warm.

I am inviting you as the representatives to our school. Here is the introduction of our school in recent years:

1: founded in * *, belongs to national demonstration of high school.
2: our teacher education department is elected by filipina-american . (ban to punish children),
3: the school dining room is exclusively on the visual design on the students' concepts.
4: school regularly extracurricular activities (do pictorial, ball games, the knowledge competition, etc.)
5, The school's appearance design is according to the designs of the students.

I have two years in our school to finish graduation courses, right, it's a little longer. The school feels like home to me for its warmness.

改动的地方很多，问题不少，很多地方完全语序用词错误，请楼主对比着看看。