哪位高手能帮我看一下这份英文翻译?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/02 09:05:07
请懂的朋友帮我看一下,是否存在语法错误或是什么的.如果有错,麻烦帮我修改一下好吗?谢谢!!!

原文:
我的名字叫×××,今年16岁。我出生在一个每天都充满着温馨和谐气氛的家庭里。从小爸爸就教导我怎样去做人,培养我做一个遇事坚强,做事有毅力,对事情充满责任感的人。而妈妈则给予了我无边的慈爱,潜移默化的培养了我对事细腻,对人友爱的性格特点。我喜欢运动以及音乐。每天,我都会抽出一些时间去打打球或是练习乐器,因为这样不仅能使我身体健康,也能陶冶情操。
在校园生活中,我认真学习,遇到难题时善于请教他人,老师和同学们也都很乐意帮助我,学习成绩还不错。在校外,我喜欢交友和聊天,在这些过程中学习一些知识并锻炼我的口才。
我目前的目标是努力学好英语和文化知识,因为我深知英语在当今社会的重要性,它是连接世界的纽带,在学习、交流和工作上都起到了很大的帮助。在本国,环境限制了英语的学习,教育水平也不能与国际齐平,使我的英语水平得不到较大的提高。因此,我想寻找一个更好的环境中去学习英语。于是,一位曾到美国学习的朋友向我推荐了她所毕业的学校,了解到只是一所口碑很好的学校。我想,在那里我可以更好地学习文化知识,使自己的文化层次得到更大的提升,并且通过我所学到的知识来了解美国文化。

译文:
My name is XXX, 16 years old this year. I was born in a full of warmth every family in harmony. Father taught me how to childhood, to cultivate a strong, I do have something to do with perseverance, sense of responsibility person. But mom, I was given the boundless mercy, exerts a subtle influence on things I trained for friendship, character. I like sports and music. Every day, I will spare some tim

My name is …. I’m 16 years old. I was born in a family full of warmth and harmony every day. When I was a child, my father taught me how to be a man, and taught me to be strong, perseverant and responsible. My mother gave me boundless love, and she exerted a subtle influence on me which made me be careful with everything and be kind to others. I like sports and music. I will spare some time to play ball or practice some instruments every day because it can make me healthy and happy.
In campus life, I work hard, and when I come across some problems I will ask for help. Teachers and classmates all like to help me, so I have good grades. Outside, I like to chat with my friends from which I learn a lot of knowledge and I practice my oral English.
My present goal is to learn English and cultural knowledge well, because I deeply know the importance of English in modern society. English is the tie of the whole world, and it play an important role in study, communication and work.