【短文改错】我实在找不出错里拉、帮到起改哈、谢谢。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/28 01:18:03
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Today is Sunday. I have been studying all day long.On the
morning,I had a dry breakfast.I have no water to drink because
the water supply had cut off.The water had come back in
the evening;I was doing maths then.I didn't stop after 12 o'clock.
After a short lunch I had the break.Then I went to my
Sunday English Class.
After a long and tried class for more than two hours,I got
to home.Some work had been done but some hadn't,I must
review all my subject such as the Science,the Humanities,
which include Chinese,Englishi,Politics and History as
well.That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.

非常感谢.

1.On→In
2.have→had
3.在cut前加上been
4.after→until
5.the→a
6.tired→tiring
7.去掉to
8.subject→subjects
9.正确
10.terribly→ terrible

1."On the morning",应该为“in”,介词用错。
2.“I have no water to drink ”中,have 应该为had,为过去时态.
3.“because the water supply had cut off.”水供应应该是被切断,所以,应该是had been cut off.

4.“I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. ”此句的意思是,我直到12点才停。故,after 应该为until.
5.“After a short lunch I had the break”,the 应该为 a ,had a break表示短暂的休息。
6.I got to home错误,回家应为went home.
7.That's terribly!错误,terribly应改为形容词terrible.
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我只找出了这些,仅供参考!

on-in
have-had
had后加been
after-until
the-a

went
hadn't-didn't
subjects
includes
terrible
期待你最后有了答案后,公布下

1 In
2 had
3 would
4 until
5 a
6
7 to 去掉
8 subjects
9 正确
10 terrible

1.文章用了过去式,所以 I have been studying