找语法错误，一个给10分

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Computers are widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play any important roles in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?

Nowaday,along with the booming of computer science，public focus their attention on education again.Accordingly,the toppic of whether teachers can be replaced by computer is being debated by more and more people,who hold widely diverse ideas and take totally different attitude.Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,which is base on educational and mental aspects.

According to experts' views,they believe that the shortage of machine is that they can't educated students according to their different abilities，in spite of they can display many media effects which teachers can't do by the right of advanced technology.However,mending project with the feedback from students'emotions is one of the most apparently advantages of expericial teachers.Besides this,tutors can provide extra study to student

Nowaday,along with the booming of computer science，public focus their attention on education again
中的public 改成the public或者public people

第一段第二行的topic写错了。

第一段倒数第二句的attitude应该改成复数。

第一段中Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,which is base on educational and mental aspects.
最好改为
Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,a conclusion which is base on educational and mental aspects.

第二段中
the shortage of machine is that they can't educated students according to their different abilities中的shortage是缺乏短缺的意思，你要表示缺点可以用disadvantage,defect,deficiency,shortcoming等等。另外你写the shortage of machine,后面有说they cannot educated students，首先前面machine应该加s, 否则后面就不应该用they,两者要一致，另外cannot不能缩写，还有是cannot educate不是educated.
后面的in spite of 后面只能加名词，不能加句子。你可以用although, even though或者是in spite of the fact that.....

by the right of advanced technology是什么意思？
mending project with the feedback不好，改成improving the teaching