UC知道找作文错误 一个额外给10分
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语法上 内容上 结构上 形式上 逻辑上 什么错都可以。。一字之师者，每个额外10分送上。
More and more people ignore basic science today.What are the causes and what are your solutions?
Nowaday,along with the growth of people life standard,the public focus their attention on education again,then the topic of basic science seem to be fail to taken into account is being debated by lots of people,who hold widely diverse ideas and take totally different attitudes.Personally,neglecting the importance of thearoy and lacking interest are crucial factors.
According to students'views,they complain that basic science is less useful in realistic life than most people think,especially,some subject such as engineering and architect are too differicult for economical students,consequently,they have an unpleased attitude to learn those curriculums step by step.Besides this,media always interview or report some celebrities like super stars in sports
1、Fortunately,this phenomenon was noted by educational experts,they require governmet to take
中间应该是句点。主语换了，一个句子里面不能有两个谓语词。楼主类似问题很多。中国人写作文喜欢用复句，绕来绕去，结果把自己和老外都绕晕了。
永远记住，一个句子里只能有一个谓语词，否则就是病句。在水平不那么纯熟的情况下，保险的方法是写清晰而正确的短句。
比如这一段：Nowaday,along with the growth of people life standard,the public focus their attention on education again,then the topic of basic science seem to be fail to taken into account is being debated by lots of people,who hold widely diverse ideas and take totally different attitudes.Personally,neglecting the importance of thearoy and lacking interest are crucial factors.
一开始public是主语，again后面就可以句点了。因为后面主语已经变成topic了。而且这句里面还有两个谓语词，be fail， is being……让人晕头转向，不知所云。千万不要先写出复杂的中文再去翻译！以为这样可以显示文采。中西方人思维不同的。你就一句一个意思，一个句号。说清楚了再说下一句。没有老外会觉得你错了。
2、people life standard是说人民生活水平吗？那应该用The People's Living Standards
3、现实生活： real life
4、some subject应该加s
楼主啊，说实话，你的作文里面问题真的不少，不在这里一一列举了。有的地方应该属于粗心，自己再好好检查一下
生活水平不是增长是改善，故grow