UC知道英语好一点帮我看看，，，谢啦
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today id weduesday,the weather is fine and everybody is here.
first of all, i think i should introduce my english. i am sorry to say that my english is terrible. so it is a challenge for me to take a passage just 3 minutes in english.
when me first time to class 2,i feel nervous and stressful because there are lots of good students in here.but, i am not worry about that now. though i am the lastest one,i believe it would not have been sustained.as the sentences goes"nothing is impossible to a willing heart"
in addition to ,we are prepared to partiapate in college entrance exam,and as the teacher said,both of the body and study is important in high 3.i consider most of us will stress in the next time.if i were in a deep stress,i would do some exercise.in fact,what i want to say is that welcome those who want to reduce the pressure to 105 house which has some tools to make campaign.
by the way,the man in 105 hous
第一行，wednesday拼写错误
第四行 when i first ..不是me 而且这个表达不规范，可以用，when the first time i come to class 2...
第五行 in here 前的in 去掉，here是副词，前面不用介词
第八行 in addition to 后的to 去掉，单独使用做状语是，不需要to,放句子中间的时候要用to,后面跟名词或者ing状态
第九行 both...and...
both of 是另一个用法，两个不要混淆用
这里的consider不恰当，用think就可以了，后面will be stressful
the next time 前面不需要加介词 去掉in
第十行 in fact 后面那句话很乱
welcome 后面是不可以跟人的
大致意思我明白，但是which has some tools to make campaign这句 我不知道你想表达什么
105house，你是不是想说105室 ，应该说room 105
最后一行 是不是应该是 the men in room 105 are friendly and funny
when you arrive here...貌似不用用完成时吧
大概就是这样语法方面的，你看看还有满意不
基本中国人可以看懂，里面单词错的太多，基本语法也有问题，其中最让人受不了的是你那个中国式英语（例如：GOOD GOOD STUDY,DAY DAY UP）。太长了怎么给你改啊。
再追加几句，你的短语用的不错。
太难改了这语法乱的。。能全盘给你改。。工程浩大。
还有就是如楼上说的CHIGLISH.。难改
大哥，我很确定CHIGLISH是这么写也是正确的。很多单词有2种拼法，不一定你那个才是正确的
哎..中国式英语.帮帮你吧,下面是我帮你重写的
It is really a fine