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When I’m with you
When I’m with you

I still remember clearly
We sat at the lake
And Listened to you sing this song
Beautiful melody and your beautiful voice
It’s amazing and beautiful
And I’ll never forget

When I’m with you

I am thinking of a dazzling girl every second
From the first time we met
Thinking of your big bright eyes
Thinking of your smooth hair
Thinking of your sweet smile
Everything in your body is perfect
You turns me on

When I’m with you

Every second to be with you is the sweetest thing
You make me happy, joyful
And not lonely

We took walks at the park together
Clear lake, Fresh air
And the bright stars hanging in the sky

We rode a horse together
And Sat together closely
I can feel your temperature

We watch a movie together
You were sitting next to me
With the weak light
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When I’m with you
When I’m with you

I still remember clearly
We sat by the lake
And listened to you sing the song
Beautiful melody and your lively（形容明快，活泼） voice
all make me crazy，I’ll be never forget

When I’m with you

I am thinking of a dazzling girl every second
At the first time we met
Thinking of your big bright eyes
Thinking of your smooth hair
Thinking of your sweety（甜美的） smile
You are so perfect to me

When I’m with you

Whenever,wherever，what to do
You all make me happy, enjoy
And make the lonely go away（使寂寞远去）

We walked at the way of park together
Clear lake, Fresh air
And the bright stars hanging in the sky

We rode a horse together
And Sat closely
I can feel your body temperature

We watch movies together
You had sit next to me
With the weak light