帮我检查一下这堆英文有没有语法错误

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I first read “DORABASE”（书名） in 2006. It was first cartoon about I have read. It was wonderful and I fell in love with it the first time I read it.We have some online communities on this cartoon and each of us likes it.

As to the love of "Dorabase"(我这句是想说：出于对dorabase的喜爱），I often focus on the news about you and your works--"Dorabase".I konw you are very busy,but I hope you can find time to reply to me.Is it OK? If so,and that too thanks. Thank you.
能详细一点吗？这里有的单词重复很多遍，而且我英语不好，有些可以详细点吗？比如XXX改成XXX。谢谢了

firstly 用副词
it was the first cartoon (that)定从 i had read.
还有没有上下文哪里来的we 可改为 many readers and i
最好改掉 xx had 过去时 liked

as to 没有出于的意思用out of 或者直接用 for
but i hope you can spare抽空 some time to ...
最后If so,and that too thanks. 二个连词不对
and去掉可以改为 it will be a great honor to me

都找出来了追点分吧

first --- firstly 副词修饰动词
was first --- was the first 需要加定冠词the 表示特指
about --- that
fell in love with ---

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