高手进来看看有没有错误，在线等

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/04 22:19:59
(I love u,too!!
i'm on vacation today~
but,unfortunately,my cell phone had left on my father's car,yesterday.And i have find it just now!!sorry!!!)
How's your back now?Has it getting beter?
Trust me,it will be alright~as well as your grandfather~
And now,u just need take more rest,babyO(∩_∩)O~
I will be always missing u，too~！！

我要表达的是：
我也爱你~
我今天放假，但不幸的是我的手机漏在我爸爸的车上了，我刚才找到..对不起！！
你的背怎么样了？好点了吗？
相信我，一切都会好起来的~包括你的爷爷~
宝贝~你现在只需要多休息就好了O(∩_∩)O~
我会常常想念你的~

有什么地方语法或表达的意思错的帮忙修正一下
有什么地方需要改的或修饰一些也说说吧~~
谢谢你们！！
呵呵~好粗心
难怪总觉得好像有点不对..
其他地方呢？没有别的错的了吗？

...两个都很好..唉~

my cell phone had left on my father's car改成

i had left my cell on my father's car

其他的，口语中没错

我直接按照你的又编辑了下就成下面的了~
我们公司天天和老外对话~几乎每人都能说英文

I love you, too
I take vacation today, but unfortunately my cell phone was left in my dad's car and I just found it, sorry!!
How is your back, better?
Trust me,it will be alright~ as well as your grandpa~
Honey, the only thing you need now is good rest O(∩_∩)O~
Miss you...