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Throughout the story there are some instances which represent dramatic irony. Everything occurred in the story is irregular. Mary Maloney, the main character of the narrative; she was pregnant. Once Patrick Maloney, her husband came back from work; he told Mary something very awful. He wanted to divorce by consent. At the moment, she was surprised and disappointed. She tried to implore her husband, but Patrick Maloney did not change his mind. Eventually, her repression broke out then she killed him with the lamb’s leg as the weapon afterwards. Moreover, Mary Maloney got out from her house then went to the store. Then the detectives come to investigate her husband’s death; she acted as nothing happen after she killed her husband. She was grim; she did not even feel guilty. She made a smart plan to lie to the detectives which she made the house messy. She made these confession to lead the policemen have illusion. Ironically, the policemen ate the lamb’s leg which was the weapon used to k

Throughout the story there are some instances which represent dramatic irony. Everything occurred/occurs in the story is irregular.

Mary Maloney, the main character of the narrative; she(去掉，前边已经有主语） was pregnant.

Once Patrick Maloney, her husband(,最好加个逗号）came back from work; he told Mary something very awful. He wanted to divorce by consent.

At the moment, she was surprised and disappointed. She tried to implore her husband, but Patrick Maloney did not change his mind.

Eventually, her repression broke out then she killed him with the lamb’s leg as the weapon afterwards. （这句话中then和afterwards保留一个就可以了）

Moreover, Mary Maloney got out from her house then went to the store. Then the detectives come/came to investigate her husband’s death;
she acted as nothing happen/happened after she killed her husband. She was grim; she did not even feel/felt guilty.

She made a smart plan to lie to the detectives which she made