请帮忙用英语翻译一句话。谢谢

Could you tell me whether I can hear "Happy Birthday" from you?

Could you please tell me, would I be able to hear you saying "Happy Birthday" today?

" please" 这个字通常在此情况之下是该用到的.在西方,这显示一个人的文明程度.

could you tell me, today will I hear from you a "happy birthday"?

could you tell me that i would hear of the "happy birthday" today?

今天我会不会听到你的....这里主观上已经是我希望能听到，故用虚拟语气I would