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1. My dream
I have a beauty dream.I hope I can have a
invisible wing.It can bring me and fly.
Fly fly,I fly to beautiful field.I have
seen the withered rice.Hand light wave.Rice
well filled-out.
Fly fly,I fly to beautiful city.I have seen
but prosperous and bustingnoisy scene.Hand light
wave.Composedly afternoon hou wonderful.
Fly fly,I fly in children's dream.They want
beautiful clothes to toy play become reconciled.
Hand light wave.These all things show in my
right in front of us.
Fly fly,I fly to have the dream in the people's
world.I saw hard figure was insisting on.Hand
light wave.Their dream is realized.Laugh so
bright.
Fly fly,I fly to place of poorness.I saw
many people and have not the meal eat.Hand light
wave.Suddenly rice of a big basket appears on
the ground.

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