英语单据改错。请英语高手简单帮忙。

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1.Anna who is playing the tennis is also good at swimming.
2.I was about to go out then it began to rain.
3.Watch the girl and her dog which are crossing the bridge.
4.When she was lying in bed ,she heard great noise.
5.Lily is good at playing tennis while her sister plays piano very well.
是 单句改错哦。再次谢谢大家。

1:去掉playing后的the(tennis 是球类运动,不加冠词。
2:then改成when(be about to:打算,将要)
3:Watch改成Watching(动名词作主语)
4:在heard后(great前)加冠词a(虽然noise 当"声响”讲时,可数不可数都行,但个人觉得此处应加a.)
5:plays后加定冠词the(弹钢琴,吉他等乐器时必须加the,而球类就不要了。如 play basketball)
请多多指教!
祝进步!

第一个去掉第二个is ,因为和第一个重复 第二个把then变成when.因为用when表示想干末事的时候突然发生企它事,第三个把while 变成that