请帮我看看一段英文有无语法错误，谢谢拉

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/19 21:51:41
Nowadays, modern technology has developed more and more sophisticated that bringing a lot of convenience for our daily life. For instance, if you want to send a letter to your friend, you don’t have to go to the post office to send the letter, you just click the send button on the computer, your friend will receive it immediately. In addition, There are amount of benefits on the internet, such as, shopping, reading books, watching movies, chatting with your friends or family and so on. The vast resource on the computer give us an opportunity to study knowledge on all kinds of subjects despite we haven’t learned from the class.

bringing 改成brings或者把that去掉
There are amount of benefits on the internet 改为
There are a amount of benefits in the internet（in the internet算是固定词组吧）
The vast resource on the computer give us 改为gives或者把resource改为复数

despite we haven’t learned from the class.改为learned them
以上

如今,现代科技发展越来越复杂,带来了很多方便我们的日常生活中。举例来说,如果你想发送给您的朋友,你们不必去邮局去寄这封信,你只要点击“发送”按钮在电脑上时,你的朋友会接受它。此外,还有数量的好处,例如,网上购物、看书、看电影,聊天,与你的朋友或家人等等。这个巨大的资源在电脑上给我们机会去学习的知识在各类主题,尽管我们还没学的课。

develope后面应该不直接跟形容词吧
第二句中间的分句没有连接词
benefit和后面的一些行为这样写 有些别扭
The vast resource on the computer 这里的资源应该写是在互联网上比较好
knowledge 一般不跟study搭配
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Nowadays, modern technology has become more and more sophisticated that brings a lot of convenience to our daily life. For instance, if you want to send a letter to your friend, you don’t have to go to the post office to send the letter. You just click the send button on the computer,and your friend will receive it immediately. In addition, There