请问这段英文 合语法 合tense吗?请矫正我，谢谢

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Dear Miss Yeung

Thanks for your taught by your heart.

I appreciate your selflessness .

I would never forgot what you have brought to me .

Today , I am grateful to you .

Last i just want to say ine thing --THANKS .

应是thanks for your teaching,因为是感谢你的课,用teaching才符合词性
from the bottom of your heart,衷心的
would是model verb,后面应跟动词原形
grateful也可以,但thankful会更好
The last thing I'd like to say is - Thanks

总的来说是能够明白你的意思的，但确实有几处不太合适，整体不够通顺。可以考虑改为：
Dear Miss Yeung,

Thanks for your teaching with selflessness. I really appreciate and will never forget what you have brought to me. At this moment(个人觉得你想表达的不是强调哪一天，而是此时此刻，所以这样修改）， I am really grateful to you. At last, there is only one word I want to say -- THANKS.

Best wishes
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