高一英文作文找错

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是家庭作业,但是我找不全,说是有十个错,大家帮忙找找吧!

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. I did my homework, read novels, watched on TV and went on trip to Qingdao. It's really a beautiful city. There are many place of interest to see. I liked the sunrise most. In the first morning I got up early. Thit was a fine day. When I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon was turning rea. After a while, a small part of the sun gradually disappeared. The sun was very red, but not shining. It rose slow. At last it broke through the red clouds and jump abouve the sea, just like a burning ball. Hou an unforgettable picture!

事情紧急啊……请求速速回答。

有速度的再另加高分!!!

第一行末尾:watched TV,没有on
第二行:went on a trip, go on a trip固定搭配
第二行末尾:There were, many places
第三行中间:On the first morning
第三行末尾:It was a ....
第四行中间:The clouds were....
倒数第二行末尾:Jumped
最后一行~拼写错误加语法错误:
What an un...... picture/ How un..... the pic was

要注意时态哦平时作文的时候~~~~~

watched TV
went on a trip
many places
gradually appeared
It rose slowly
jumped above the sea
of interest to visit
On the first morning
What an unforgettable picture!