各位英语高手来看下我的作文 急

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题目要求是：what did your parents use to do when they were children?How is it different from what you do?

我写的 我是九年级的学生、这一单元主要学习usted to的用法、

I likes reading comics.My mother used to likes reading stories when she was a child.she thinks stories is interesthing. She used to listen to music on radivo,but now I listen music on computer.
My mother love sports very much, she likes playing ping-pong,but I think that it's boring,I like playing tennis with my friends because it's funny.I like eating chocolate it's delicious and my mother best likes ice cream. Her favorite subject is math,but I like history ,because I think history is relaxing .And my favorite things is suffer on the Internet,and she likes listen to music.

最好帮我加一下开头和结尾。
谢谢了啊
其实这本来是填写的一个表格 是老师要求我们改变成作文的
表格是

I… My parents used to …
books
music
sports
food
favorite subject at school
favorite

The two generations of my parents and I do different things when we were young.

I like reading comics book but my mother used to like reading novels when she was a child. She thought stories were much more interesting than comics. She used to listen to music on radio, where I now listen on my computer.

My mother love sports very much, she used to play ping-pong[table tennis], but I think that it's boring. Indeed, I like playing tennis with my friends because it brings more fun. Chocolate is my favorite food yet mum liked ice-cream back to the old days. Her favorite subject was math, but I like history ,because I think history is relaxing. And my favorite things is surfing on the Internet, and she liked to listen to music.

LZ啊，不是我说你....首先你相当跑题了
老师问你你们都干些啥，关爱吃巧克力冰激凌有啥关系？
.... anyway啦，我改的比较多，你自行斟酌再交吧～ 好运哦