请帮我修改一下英语日记 001-kiss me girl

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Several days ago,I read a piece of news from my mobile

phone newspaper which really shocked me.A Taiwanese girl

who'll leaving Paris where she stayed in the past few

years and loved,is soliciting kisses of 100 men in the

streets in memory of her life in Paris.She even hired a

professional photographer to take pictures for her.
Yang ya qing,her name,became a hit words overnight in

the internet.Over 1 million netizens crowded to her blog

,include me.Thanks to her beauty and photographer's good

shot,the pictures look romantic and warm.It aroused a

lot of controversies,someone said she is just a slut,and

this crazy behavior is not different from having sex

with 100 men.
But some people especially the 80's see this merely a

personal activity and someone even support her strongly

for her romantic idea and courage.The

Maybe I modified that too much, just for consulting.

Several days ago,I read a piece of news from e-newspaper on my mobile
phone which shocked me a lot. A Taiwanese girl who was about to leave Paris--where she loved and lived in the past few years, was asking for kisses from 100 men on the streets to commemorate her living in Paris. She even hired a professional photographer to record those scenes for her.
Yang Yaqing, the girl's name, became a hit word overnight on Internet. Over 1 million netizens, include me, swarmed into her blog
. Benefit from her beauty and photographer's good work, those pictures looked very romantic and warm. The incident triggered wide debate among people, some people criticized her as a bitch and this crazy behavior have no any difference from having sex with 100 men.
But some people, especially those post-80's considered that just a personal act and have nothing to do with morality. Some of them even strongly s