我这封外贸邮件很中国式吗?我应该注意什么问题?就算是中国式,发出去应该也没什么问题吧?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/08 09:44:48
Hi 。。。:

I've looked through my sentbox, and I didn't find 5% discount. So I think maybe you made a mistake. Actually the initial discount I gave you is 3% and it's in 21th, Jul mail. I attached it down below this mail.

After our manager's full discussion, we think the price of EXW USD211,500 is the best. I've explained it in my previous one mail. Hope you can understand us.

You can be assured of our product function, configuration and quality, we have confidence in these. And sincerely welcome to come here for inspect, we'll arrange it properly for you.Looking forward to our cooperation.

Have a nice day,

答得好会加分。

I’m very glad that you have interested in our products and hope sincerely we can have business with you. But unfortunately I can’t find any records about 5% discount when I looked through my email. Actually the initial discount I gave you is 3% in 21st, Jul ,the email I attached it down below as.

Now, After our manager's full discussion, we think the price of EXW USD211,500 is the best price. You know I explained the reasons to you before, I hope you could understand us. Thanks.

What’ more, pls assured of our product function, configuration and quality, we have confidence in these and we promise to supply you the best goods with Low-Price. And sincerely welcome to come here for inspect and have more conversations if you are convenient, we'll arrange properly for you.
Looking forward to you good news. We appreciate it very much.

看看这样会不会好点,祝好运!

恐怕会把老外搞晕,大概不会确切的知道你要表达什么意思。 建议你找个翻译帮助你写信,21万的买卖可不是儿戏,必须把你们的确切的意思转达给对方,绝对不应该存在任何误解,任何的误解都可能