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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/02 12:45:41
写信的方式通常有两种:用笔和用电子邮件写信.两种方式各有特点.请你按照以下要求写一篇英语短文:
1.用笔写信:传递真情,邮票传播文化艺术
2.用电子邮件写信:快捷,节省邮资
3.我喜欢的方式及理由
注意:词数100~120,文章开头已给出(不计词数).
There basically two ways to write a letter.Both ways have their own advantages.
One way is to write a letter with a pen.In this way,You can convey your true feeling to others,What is more,Stamps will convey culture and history to people all over the world.
Another way is to send e-mails,It is not only convient but also can save stamp cost.If you have friends abroad,the message can be sent to him whenever you want.
As for me,Iprefer to the latter.Fistly,Using Intertnet can save my time when I am busy.Then it can narrow the gap with friengs.Meanwhile,Photos taken recently can be e-mailed to others by this way. Maybe only in this way can we enjoy the rapid development of the Interent.

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Firstly we should warmly love our nation,show respect to our mainland and shchool.Then,wo need a goal toward

There are two ways to write a letter.Both of the two ways have their own advantages.
One way is to write a letter with a pen.In this way,You can convey your true feeling to others,What's more,Stamps will convey culture and history to people all over the world.
The other way is to send e-mails,It is not only convenient but also can save the cost of the stamps.If you have friends in abroad,the message can be sent to him whenever you want.
As for me,I prefer to the latter.Fistly,Using Intertnet can save my time when I am busy.secondly, it can narrow the gap with friengs.Meanwhile,Photos taken recently can be e-mailed to others by this way. Maybe only in this way we can enjoy the rapid development of the Interent.

Firstly we should love our nation warmly,showing respect to our mainland and shchool.Then,we need a goal towards life which can remain us never to give up.
Secondly,wo should live with parents peacefully,respect our teachers and get alo