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I’m a college student in South China Normal University, major in psychology. As yearning towards the top-class education in Cambridge, I do hope to be a postgraduate student in your department in the next year.
My current GPA is about 3.2. And I have some volunteer experiences which related with psychology also with some research experiences. The highest honor is University Scholarship. My IELTS score have not come out yet.
I’m wondering am I suitable for the MPhil in Social and Developmental Psychology course?
Thanks for your time. I am looking forward your reply.
Sincerely yours, XXX
Dear Prof. Lamb
I’m a college(去掉college) student in South China Normal University(校名最好再查查，你这个说法很奇怪）, major in psychology. As yearning towards the top-class education in Cambridge, I do hope to be a postgraduate student in your department in the next year( 去掉 in the,直接说 next year 就好了).
My current GPA is about 3.2. And I have some volunteer experiences which related with psychology also with（把also with 改成 as well as) some research experiences. The highest honor is University Scholarship(你想表达你拿了学校的最高奖学金么，Once I won the highest scholarship in my university）. ( And ,加个连接词）My current GPA is about 3.2. (But) my IELTS score have(改成 has) not come out yet.
I’m wondering( whether) I am suitable for the MPhil in Social and Developmental Psychology course (or not) .
Thanks for your patient. I am looking forward (to )your reply.
Sincerely yours, XXX