这段对话这样翻译对吗？

When I came into Kakuma
我到卡库马的时候
正确

I didn't have that my time to stay for 10 years.
我不知道自己将在这里生活10年
这句英语你是不是打错了？要不然不应该这样啊。但是大概意思差不多就是这样

I was saying,"Sudan is going to be okay
我当时说“我会回苏丹”
错！
我当时说，苏丹将会没事的。（逻辑上不太懂这句话的意思，但是中文是要这样翻译的）

maybe within one month or two weeks. "
也许两个星期，最多一个月
错！
也许在一个月之内，或者两个星期

I thought I would be back to Sudan soon.
我想 我会很快返回苏丹
正确

That was my imagination.
那是我的幻想
正确
但这里翻译成梦想比较好。幻想有点不够褒义。

1： when I arrived Kakuma
2: I even didn't know I was going to stay there for 10 years.
3: I said, "I will be back to Sudan.
幻想 也可以用illusion、